This Poem was Submitted By: Michael L. Chick On Date: 2001-07-04 18:03:38 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Surface Change

        Standing in the swelling winds, as your hair blows to and fro across your face.          Watching the turbulence change the waves of circumstance. Every step across          the plot is like pelting rain of the darkened clouds of gain. The workers bodies         sore and grievous as are their minds. Shown by the expressions of having desolately            drained souls as they willingly fulfill the delivery of weighted rearranging.              Creating the striking appearance of Surface changes. While the same old teeth              gritting grind makes the gateway to further substance gathering.               Pushing the humps to fill in the sunken slumps by adding with             clumps of old bones toped with darkened earth rich in smell of fertile soil.              If only the sowing of the new seed knew and understood the tow of the                               workers underneath thines feet…

Copyright © July 2001 Michael L. Chick


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