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Time Time keeps passing Without asking If I want to go with it What it I dont Can I stop and get off Is Death a way out No Death is just a continuation Of the Life once lived The Dreams once Broke And every Lie you Spoke Hell with Entrap you Rot you beat and taunt you Pulling at you Ripping at everything once mortal You are an immortal now Live with your Choices Should have listened to the voices Once spoken They had wisdom They have now found the Kingdom Where the good are resting Watching Humans Testing Lifes Reality Struggling in the midst are the demons Wondering dreaming If they just waite They can make a new life in the nick of time But they dont realise their life is not worth a dime Hiding in the trees Angels breathe They are waiting to take another Another Brother Take him away go now son You can not squander another day Say a Prayer Times slipping fast I hope you make it You have just breathed your last |
Additional Notes:
Here is my one and only "lighter" works out of my demented, twisted literary notebook. Rather long but I think has a great hidden and noticeable moral. Capitalisation is there to highlight hidden meanings. No punctuation, I do not believe in it when dealing with poetry. All comments welcomed. Thanks for reading. Also for those who seem just a little lost somewhere in there the beginning speaks of the beginning of life, then death, then back to someone wasting there days then to their death. Yes I know, long and drawn out much like this additional note. One last thing, this was written quite a while back so things mentioned, hidden or noticeable, I now disagree with. This comment made for those used to my grotesque works of today.
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