To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!
Click Here To add this poem to your "Voting Possibilities" list!
IceIuSd Goodness in Life? What do you mean? Are things not only as they seem? Are you a test? A test to my Mind? Making sure I'm still Sane And still hold my place in Time? Life is beautiful? Who said that? Surely that person has never seen all Black They have yet to experience Love or Deceit Truth or Lies, Humans Born or Beat When my Mind see's Red and My Soul see's Black I look to the Stars for the answer I lack Each one looks the same Yet some are bigger than the rest That must mean they are superior They are the best I'm thrown back to my body My Answer is clear My Eyes see Black but My Soul See's Fear |
Additional Notes:
I thought I would put this one on there for those who can't stand the fact that I leave out punctuation. Too many question marks but hey its punctuation. It is also traditional for me to have things scattered all over the place as hidden meanings...ooooh...ahhhh....yes hidden. Also for those jumping for joy since this time I said that I included punctuation thinking its open season to beat me up for not using all of it here sorry, but the question marks are the only punctuation used besides maybe a coma. For those new to my theory I believe punctuation ends a poem before its really ended.
Sorry, there are no critiques for this poem in our system... If the poem is older, the critiques have been purged!