This Poem was Submitted By: Christopher T. Moore On Date: 2001-07-11 13:04:48 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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A Real Life Fairytale Dance

Her little eyes glistened     as she stared with delight I could not help but think     that "this is one perfect night." One amongst many     I do hope it will be One shared with such pleasures     just between you and me. To you, all is wonder     for you haven't a care For me it's refreshing     just to be with you there How simple and sacred     my life becomes when we're here Outside where creation     beckons us to draw near. To me ...just a field     a simple dark green expanse To you it's enchanted     a real life fairytale dance So I lift you and hold you     and we gaze out as one For a moment I see things     a way I've long not done Such grace and such beauty     those little lights twinkling there Lifted up by warm currents     as they dance on the air "See! Light'in bugs Daddy!"     her little voice does cry out "Yes baby, I see them!"     ...and see what life's all about.

Copyright © July 2001 Christopher T. Moore

Additional Notes:
I thought I would share this one with you, because it just happened last night :)

This Poem was Critiqued By: James Edward Schanne On Date: 2004-09-07 18:32:37
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Re: A critique... I HAVE AN IDEA!! Marilyn ( Sep,07.2004-18:00 This is a post from the forum , seems everyone is concerned about the site, just in case you aren't checking I'd thought I'd try another approach to bring it to your attention Count me in as a "blogger" how can we get this message out to everyone when just a few of us come to the forum? If Chris will answer Arnie's e-mail and agrees with the idea he can do it. Well...ya if he will answer. I don't want our bedloved TPL to die a horrible has sustained me much more than you might think and I know others feel the same way. I use to go to Poem Kingdom once in a while but only met one person there that still e-mails me. He told me in his last e-mail that the site is in real trouble and one person has started her own poetry site because of it. Yes....I haved tried in vain to get him to post here as he is a prolific writer and the worst of it is he has never given me a reason why he doesn't give us a try. In the mean time lets keep criting and posting... let us not unplug the machine yet! Hanging on by my teeth...Marilyn

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