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Will you suck my toes? With passion, you say that you love me You dare, compare me… to the rose. But, I demand proof, of the truth of your love. So tell me; ”will you suck my toes?” You tell me my lips are like candy Or, with grace when I walk, liquid flows But, I don’t desire pretty phrases Just tell me; “will you suck my toes?” Don’t bring me a 4-carat diamond. Or presents wrapped in shinny bows. I don’t need chocolates and flowers Just answer; “will you suck my toes?” I don’t want you to say it’s too crazy, This unconventional thing I propose. Just swear you’ll do “anything” for me. When I query; “will you suck my toes?” I’m not looking for someone lacking passion. I’ve already had one of those! So, don’t tell me you’ll love me forever. Just say; that “YOU WILL”, suck my toes! |
Additional Notes:
I wrote this poem for fun after I told my ex that next time I fell in love it would be with a man who would (the most outrageous thing I could think of) suck my toes. Of course he said, "oh that's gross."
He didn't get the point at all... Do you?
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