This Poem was Submitted By: Michael L. Chick On Date: 2001-07-20 17:39:24 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Fallen State

I state to state’s men sedated from the united Americans. Stating the cause of case indeed, the stately strong hold  of the bold burden’s beholding us in supporting this land. Fire works bursting like the boisterous laughter in the  Congressional (State House.) We the people feel the buster of placing you in lead. Disgustedly we proclaim disastrous your deeds in you staying in luxurious. Seriously the repercussions of relative relations raffling the life of the people in the states. In faith we placed, placing you on high. A flag just to drag as you raise the immigrants? Streaming the demeaning of our desolate and empty embers. To remember what our ancestors were fighting for in the wars. Willing the mighty swords to be the freedom world leader. Just to surrender the rights won in battle.(With lives lost)  Give me respect, show me I have rights... Lead the good fight so I might not be the cistern under wheel, willingly wait to support me the one who gave you the right. For all I see is fallen state...

Copyright © July 2001 Michael L. Chick

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