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Unravel Mature thought Born to a childish mind Knowledge is bought While answers you find Fear is a guide Precaution essential Humans tend to lie Paranoia beneficial Fear can block a road But always plow through Fear is needed to carry the load But useless if abused Optimism is a conformity Happy without asking why? I'm fine being me No rainbows are needed to die |
Additional Notes:
I never use punctuation. For those new to my work my theory is that punctuation ends a poem before its really complete. I do have one question mark in there, yes, because it goes perfect with the "why". Thanks. I tried to turn this into an optomistic poem so those of you who keep writing me telling me to seize the day would finally hault with their optomistic comments for once. At the end, yes, I do bring out my real pessimistic self. I can never hide that...this I have learned.
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