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Deadly Peace Sight unseen Sound unheard My soul once free Is now disturbed Thoughts of Death Race through my mind Peace I seek But will never find Things are bleak I am all alone For the one I love Has turned to stone Shadowed in darkness Secrets hide Awaiting to be freed To turn the tide As the moon hangs high My heart sinks low I am lost in a world That is merely a show A show that aires My pain and grief A show that aires My jealousy of the deceased Peace I seek Peace I need If it lies in a pine box Let It Be |
Additional Notes:
I do not believe in punctuation, I believe it ends a poem before its really completed. There are two words capitalised in the poem to sort of draw them sharply to the readers eye. This is the piece that started it all. This is my first real solid poem, written quite some time ago. Also for those who don't pick it up right away the piece is all talking of the same thing, feeling alone, heartbroke ect. My statement about the secrets hiding is their to tie in with why I was upset which was because the foundation of my relationship was lies. Thanks for reading.
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