This Poem was Submitted By: Lil Galvin On Date: 2001-09-08 23:54:46 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Journey of Desire

Pulsating beneath the Earth’s crust,  a tremor caresses the fragile ground. Shelved, shut in for eons the abyss stirs an internal lake of fire.   A hidden tide expands,  growing, piercing, pushing, pulling.   The welling of intensity prevails!   Unable to withstand,  an ancient earth separates surrendering its will, to the velvet passion.     Bursting, bondage broken,  the magnificent fire erupts, painting crimson across a cerulean sky. The passionate searing force  moves down the mountain,  zealously flowing, marking the trail for release. Who will embrace this inferno?   Hearing her melody he hastens to the shore, his resplendent blaze fervently flowing.   She waits, tenderly caressing;  lapping the very ground,  which will bring his completeness to her With a surge of longing he rushes forward, rolling, rocking, resting, swaying,  upon her waves of lazuline blue.  "Journey with me my beloved, to dreams anew,"  she whispers unto his heart; and his carmine blaze kisses her longing lips…  as the Heavens gaze on.

Copyright © September 2001 Lil Galvin

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This is a resubmission with punctuational and structural changes. Thank you in advance for all comments.


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