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How Dare You How could you forget my Birthday? The day the Lord chose for me to be born! How could you forget our Anniversary? The day we stood before God, and become one! How could you forget Valentine's Day? The day lovers, all over the world, proclaim their love for one another! How could you stand before me now, and ask me to forgive! After you............. forgot your vows, forgot we were married, forgot you loved Me! How could you expect me to forgive, after all you've forgotten! HOW DARE YOU!! |
Additional Notes:
I know that some of you will pick this poem apart because of the structure, but please try to read this poem with more feeling than mind. For in truth isn't that where our poetry comes from. In the fourth stanza I am not sticking to the form of the poem because as she or he is trying desperatly to make the other person understand the hurt felt due to the things he/she has forgotten. They took a deep breath and one by one began ticking off the things done one two three....... I hope you get it and feel the poem without picking it to death, but I am ready for you, bring it on!
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