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Just Another Mountain

It took him awhile to see the light He does not know what made it right just started to go and when it was done and after the struggle what had he won? Many times he cried how long would it be Another ungrateful lover added to his misery near the end of one battle, she bid him farewell just another dimension in his collective hell, He paid all his dues, he passed all his tests but now he drowns in another mess He may never see, what he wants to be For some play God on this earthly tree They are perfect in their own eyes no mistakes, no alibis and even though he is weary he has not given in It's just another mountain, when does the journey begin? TEA BV 1999

Copyright © March 2000 Tom Atterberry


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