This Poem was Submitted By: carole j mennie On Date: 2001-11-30 12:29:49 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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You Found Me

You found me eating lunch at the Kream & Kone, a mere potentiality, my lips greasy with fried clam strips, my ears made deaf by the drum of time thumming, thumming, like timpani, a constant solar cacophony. I was a mixed metaphor, an old maid in need of rescue. Your Elvis eyes played me like an electric guitar. I trembled, in sync with cosmic chords. Mellowed out. And my onion rings lost their appeal.

Copyright © November 2001 carole j mennie


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