This Poem was Submitted By: Primrose Maclean On Date: 2002-01-21 22:02:36 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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NOT THE SAME

A breeze like an embrace Close your eyes, allow it to envelope you Not happy, not un-happy, calm There is a place like this Mine is not the same as yours. A friend, a place, a moment, a mouthful, a paradise  Anything and everything But mine is not the same as yours. Solitude, at peace and war with your thoughts Senses heightened, cannot see or hear Memories and futures meld Molten lava, crawling through time Picking up the past, building up in magnitude Danger and beauty There is a place like this, But, mine is different to yours. A time, a fragrance, a gut feeling, a taste, a laugh All things, but yours is not the same as mine.

Copyright © January 2002 Primrose Maclean


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