This Poem was Submitted By: Marcia McCaslin On Date: 2002-03-07 23:18:20 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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The Cleaning Lady

She was working well into her sixties. Ten hours a day, she cleaned things. Germs--they were the enemy, the challenge, because she couldn't see if they were gone or were still lurking there. All it takes is one. She hummed while she worked, and to her, this was a fringe benefit of the job. Secretaries can't hum, doctors consoling patients can't hum, but cleaning ladies are almost expected to hum. On good days. In the hospital environment, she was overjoyed at leaving a patient's room clean. Coming in to blood and hair, spittle, urine, all manner of smelly things, she cleaned. But her heart always sank...at first. Upon leaving the room, she'd take a deep, fragrant breath and hold it. Clean bedding smelled so good, a shower disinfected, wiped down,  dried, polished, and gleaming. Well, it was just like a rose being left on her cart--a gift, a thank-you, from someone passing by perhaps and seeing her hard at work and knowing that cleaning ladies...love roses too.

Copyright © March 2002 Marcia McCaslin


This Poem was Critiqued By: Andrea M. Taylor On Date: 2004-04-04 18:28:26
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Marcia, I was taken in by the title, moved by your verses. I worked in a hospital as a nurse for many years. I would always take the time to thank these ladies and gentleman who would work so hard and seem so pleasant. I am grateful to you for acknowledging their efforts. As a patient, I looked forward to the visits and chats. Your poetry is a lovely gesture to so many hard working people. The read is nice. The images are real. I can even smell the disinfected air fluff in my face as she left. Have Windex will travel... Andrea


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