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Awakened I sensed you in endless plight; you who saw me in that time. I was lain on harmful soil. Anguish exuded as I wept. Senses gone all fear ensued. Grief echoed amidst the realm. Eyes flaming love numbed; ensnared by evil’s pledge. Rage found sorrow, fate swayed with fresh raze. I drifted in misty lands to return to deadened sleep. Now I wake to find; you were there… |
Additional Notes:
This poem is in answer to one that touched me deeply as I read it, "Sixth Sense", and has to do with a tormenting time at age 18. It may not make much "sense" to you as you don't know the story, but this is the first time I have attempted writing a poem like this. I am sure there are technical suggestions, but this was from my heart.
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