This Poem was Submitted By: arnie s WACHMAN On Date: 2002-05-30 13:35:25 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Final Thoughts

Six Pick up sticks Five I’m still alive Four Through the door Three Still free Two Will they find out One Tuck, and roll, and run No time Bob and weave Red yellowredyellowredyellow… …in endless streams Acrid smell of sulphur The wire does not sing …it cuts g-d god GOD! Does he live here? Juno This is my rifle This is my gun… Wet, warm down my pant leg For me the war has just begun Caching, caching, caching Wet, warm red through my jacket Shit I didn’t even feel it For me, the war, and life …is over!

Copyright © May 2002 arnie s WACHMAN


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