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Saline Ecstasy (rated R) Saline beads caress her breasts And trickle down her thighs Radiant droplets, shimmer on brows Passion sparkles in her eyes She rocks upon my ridged throne My staff held warm and deep And in her moans of raptured bliss I feel our pleasure steep Silver dew streams thru valleys Running where our bodies meet Moist slapping sounds serenade As we strive to feel complete Tongues engage in fevered dances As she robustly conquers me Sliding on my stalwart sword Riding me — to ecstasy |
Additional Notes:
Inspired by “When a man’s fancy” by arnie s WACHMAN. It got me thinking about sweat and desire and before I knew what was happening out popped this poem. Thanks Arnie!
Title Suggestions welcome.
Patti
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