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I wanted you tonight! I hunger Ravenous for your creamy dew upon my tongue I long To taste your sweetness as I devour you I ache For the decadent feeling of you clinging to my lips I crave your nectar; moist and sensual to consume I mourn your loss; yearning to savor you But alas… Someone ate my cheesecake! |
Additional Notes:
I thought a lot of the poetry this month was a little ‘heavy’ so I posted this one ‘just for fun.’ All I want to know is did it make you smile or laugh. No other critique is needed.
Thanks Patti
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