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I'M STILL WITH YOU I'm giving up this body and i'll rest in peace in the life everafter because it was only on lease the body god gave us is ours for awhile but in the end we won't need it as we walk that last mile I can tell you don't greive and i know you won't listen but rest asure my children it's just the body thats missing my spirit will be with you as you go on with your life and the memories i know will cut like a knife Take all of these memories of me and your dad pass them on to my grandchildren let them know what we had make your memories as well and mix with mine and the pain my children will get better with time you can morn for my body i wore for awhile but i'm still with you always looking down with a smile remember this also as you go thru time i'm absent in body but i;m still in your mind |
Additional Notes:
i wrote this poem for my neices and nephews when my sister-inlaw died
she was a wonderful person that i loved very much.i tried to put myself in
her place to find the right things to say i thought what would she say to her
children?they loved it and read it at her funeral i was honored.also submitted to
poetry.com
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