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Student/Teacher Ravenous for revelation and Seeking secrets in manuscripts The novice;, replete with evidence Is sated and in repose Seeking secrets in manuscripts Using awareness to achieve an end Sated and in repose He takes his time, works his plan Using awareness to achieve an end Treading down the road of no return He takes his time, works his plan And he questions the path taken Treading down the road of no return Realizing the choice was hasty He questions the path taken And alters the course before it’s too late Realizing the choice was hasty, he turns The novice, replete with evidence Teaches those Ravenous for revelation |
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