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Displaying Critiques 51 to 60 out of 60 Total Critiques.| Poem Title | Poet Name | Critique Given by Mick Fraser | Critique Date |
| Beautiful Nature | Robin Ann Crandell | Hi Robin; TY for the work....now I am "in the mood!" Being a typical male specimen and easily influenced by any mention of sex, I was moved by this piece. In particular the folowing lines left certain visual pleasures dancing in my mind. "My tongue slithers from your belly button to your now hard nipples." "My naked breasts touch yours As you lick my lips" "Down my tongue goes Exploring every inch of your body I softly peck at our stomach As my hands wonder to your ever so beautiful nature" shuddering here "Your heart is beating so fast, so loud Your moans fill the once quiet room" YIKES....I gotta calm down!! "First gentle, then rough they become Thrusting every so deeply We are now one" Whew...what a read. I loved your ideas and work. There are other sites (not as reputable as this one maybe....lol) that would love to have a posting like this. TY for sharing. Mick | 2004-01-23 10:31:11 |
| Sam | Regis L Chapman | Hi Reeg... Sam...that pervasive comfort-provoking purveyor of happiness. A rascal, a friend and may even a confidante, but don't get her too excited with your relationship or she'll scratch a message in your forearm. OK...why wouldn't your wife be jealous of another pussy? Ty for sharing this entertaining and fun comfort piece. I very much enjoyed it. Mick | 2004-01-22 09:06:13 |
| acrostic 2 (Prodigal Son) | Erzahl Leo M. Espino | Give me the simple poem and I will make you king! Being a writer, it has always been my goal and belief that we can provoke the thoughts of more people if we craft brief but poignant messages. This is exactly what you have done here as this work could be read by various groups or cultures and be appreciated in many ways. Also, you don't have to be religious or even spiritual to enjoy this. Having recently been attracted to acrostic poems, you taught me that the economy of this type (one word per letter) provides a pleasing and fulfilling read in a short almost haiku way. I would not change a word. It is well done. Mick | 2004-01-22 08:57:20 |
| Dreams Will Come | Michael Bird | Hello Michael; This is a very traditionally structured work and reminds me of why I came to like poetry in the first place. First, I don't have to spend a lot of time interpreting this offering. Your message is quite clear. Second, I found that the words with all the rhymes could easily be put to music and lastly, your ending ties up the piece completely...there aren't any unanswered questions. Ty for sharing your effort and keep writing. Mick | 2004-01-22 08:44:07 |
| A Disturbing Poem | Robin Ann Crandell | Wow...well done Robin!!! You were definitely "in the 'writing' zone" when you crafted this work. I loved it. "Don't worry my dear, I loved you too"...often crimes of passion are not explained so simply, so sickly. I can feel the maggots getting their nutrition from my eyes. Even though I am dead, it still tickles. EXCELLENT!!!! That partial stanza is so descriptive, I could clearly see it. I also loved. "slaughtered me like a cow"...but the ending was priceless...this misguided lover will live with your memory and haunting forever. This was very entertaining and different, not obscure..great fun. Thanks for sharing. Mick | 2004-01-20 10:54:40 |
| Michelle | Claire H. Currier | Hi Claire I very much like your tribute to the love you have for your daughter. I do love the image of the time you became lost in love with your baby and I can completely relate to it. I am happy that you decided to try an acrostic poem. I enjoy these very much and especially when they are personal like this one. Thanks for sharing it with us. Mick | 2004-01-18 12:59:43 |
| pushpull | Regis L Chapman | Hello Regis; OK...employ poetic license, but I don't agree with you that the more obscure the better. I prefer writing that can lead to many different interpretations that are perhaps all justified, but being incomprehensible because of obscurity is a potential result. I am not certain where this piece falls...somewhere between obscure and clear as mud I guess. Regarding my interpretation of this offering...I am not that bright and easily confused and writing like this only adds to my utter confuzzedeness...but here goes... Playing chess in this life, (I love the rook right line)...the plumbers and numbers is transitional for the challenges that face us and how we react and the final leap of faith out of the Cessena is saying...what the hell we gotta trust in the push pulls and packing we have done... If I am way off base, I guess that you should be happy...lol. Take care and thanks for the puzzle...very entertaining. Mick | 2004-01-17 13:25:01 |
| Sweet Irony | Robin Ann Crandell | What a sad sad story. Your pain screams at the reader in this offering. I loved it! From a critical standpoint, I have only one comment. I am not sure that I grasped exactly what was ironic. Was it the fact that you wanted this person but you couldn't have him? I am a little slow sometimes, but I am guessing that is what it was. I think it may have been reality that brought you back and not sweet irony...but I don't want to second-guess your intention. Thank you for writing this interesting and moving poem. Mick | 2004-01-10 20:53:57 |
| Minipo’ms (inspired by Bienvenido N. Santos) | April Rose Ochinang Claessens | Thank you for the introduction to Filipino-American writing. It is clear after having read some of Mr. Santos' work this afternoon that he was motivated to write through his experiences and that his simple yet complete writing style may have attracted many new readers to this genre and most definitely had an influence on the Filipino-American literary community. I have bookmarked some more of his writing on the web...thanks again. Regarding your poem; it is a short pleasant read that had a surprise ending; snowballs were the last thing I would have thought they would be holding...shows how much I know. I truly can't offer you any critique that would improve this special piece. It is perfect as is. Mick | 2004-01-10 20:03:32 |
| A Hope For A Thousand Tommorrows | stephen g skipper | Hello Stephen Infrequent are my critiques here because I am an anti-poet poet. Don't get me wrong, I love poetry in simpler forms, not the pretentious or sometimes overly ridiculously simple (the only style I am capable of as you can see from my critique). This offering is from the heart...and one of the few that caught my attention because I didn't have to run to the dictionary and I didn't yawn. I hope that your love continues to inspire your writing spirit. Mick | 2003-09-15 23:24:51 |
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