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I live on a small lake with my 12 year-old son,whose mother died two years back.Why did I tell you my worst experience, along with my best-my son. Thoughts circle around my brain -they never leave.I have Attention Deficit Disorder.Yes -I can hear your laughter.To have this disorder as an adult is just dumb. Words "play me as do my thoughts When my poor son speaks about me, these are his words my "Dad is crazy but a good crazy."I'm different,kind,loves kids,and hear me on this-I respect many people-and I respect me.

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Our BackyardMick Fraser Hello Mike: This poem is a landscap of -your state of mind. It reveals you without "self." I hope all you poets are angry, because we are here are out of control-out of our minds.Where is our anger? I love your last two lines---Poetry must be written with your imagination--more than breathing thoughts ,it's breathing dreams that curl around each toe-held together by the pleasure of ranting.Throw Freud some infantile dreams and he will go on,and on.2004-08-03 19:26:57
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