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I am 43 years old, married with 3 children. I have 3 AA's and a BA from CSUN Call me if you like any of these poems, 760-574-7096 or if you live in California and need some Life Insurance Every one is free to email me if they want to see some other poems if you happen to come across this bio,, please read all my poems,, past to present CLAUS RANSWILL PS. i never really enjoyed reading poetry until coming to this site,, although i would really appreciate accurate critiques and points http://ranswill.com/

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Displaying Critiques 1 to 18 out of 18 Total Critiques.

Poem TitlePoet NameCritique Given by Claus Michael RanswillCritique Date
My votingDellena Rovitogood standings2009-05-08 16:11:15
My Votes for AprilJames C. Horakwow, very eyeopeining , as is my website, http://ranswill.com/ Points: 2.8125 Calling center blues submitted by Claus Michael Ranswill on 2009-04-19 19:56:31 thanks claus2009-05-02 20:39:41
My April VotesDuane J Jacksonthis has been quite a month for all of us, thanks for sharing mine didnt come in too good either keep going claus2009-05-02 20:34:54
Scan........(Revised)DeniMari Z.Very interesting and almost voyeuristic for some reason, I don’t know why Visually artistic and great imagery throughout, Inspirational too Things aren’t always what they seem Write a poem before we scream About a flower or a tree Anything can bring some glee Write about paintings or a garden Or cracks on walls in your den 2009-04-30 17:04:32
The Blossoms EyeJames Edward SchanneNice style and flow, good rhymes and structure I like the lines going in with each sentence Intriguing and thought provoking It reminds me of the birth of a child I don’t know why 2009-04-30 16:52:30
SpacesDellena RovitoThis is a very good love story Very visual and imaginative Great reflective piece of imagery and talent This reflects the eternity and illusion of love itself Sometimes up, sometimes down Sometimes close, sometimes so far away Good story 2009-04-30 16:46:01
Mother's BoyDeniMari Z.This is a very moving piece; I cheated and read the notes first The structure and style is good throughout The message is clear and painful I could not even imagine, my 3 kids are 10-15-17, time flies by so fast yet so slowly also Very original and personal , keep writing, sometimes the writing helps heel faster than time or at least helps a little 2009-04-30 16:39:33
See Yourself FoundDeniMari Z.very very good love the rhyme and structure great love song\ the second line is rough they’re there very reflective of life, love, death and purpose makes us think of our own life and what have we done with it very good, one of the best this month 2009-04-29 14:58:50
On A WingRegis L ChapmanVery chaotic and turbulent This goes in lots of directions Unique, different and colorful Emotional, reflective and observational Not sure how this can be improved, Seems very personal and introspective 2009-04-29 14:53:18
When Children....James C. HorakThis is unique, different and intriguing I would like to know the inspiration The hidden messages beg to be explained I like the structure; I just would like more explanation 2009-04-29 14:13:28
Into TurnJames C. HorakShort and to the point, If rhyme is used, I think it should be used throughout, just my opinion; I like the rhyme that was used, the last line gets lost for me because there is no rhyme after all the others, It does make an impact and makes one think, inspired me to write this Justice system is out of whack Politicians always on the attack Hypocrites and liars they all are You don’t have to look too far Your vote is up for sale They seldom end up in jail Like a boat, away they sail Maybe justice, when they end up in hell 2009-04-20 23:33:40
Blur of RaptureDeniMari Z.This is very visual and unique, the first thing that popped out to me were the two typos, essencials to essentials and exagerates to exaggerates, I don’t know if this is deliberate or not, if not to fix this you can type all your poems into a word document, look for the red squiggly line, then fix, pretty easy, could just be an oversight, as for the rest of the poem, it is colorful and full of imagery, it could be longer, it could use more colors throughout, it is hard for me a rhyming poet to judge a non rhyming poem, but I would not critique if I did not like it. I like the story, the flow, and the vision, good work2009-04-20 23:06:40
March Vote!Dellena RovitoIf this is indeed a poem, it is unique, different and strange, it has been many years since being on this site, I see a lot has changed, what I see is a deep introspection of points, critiques, what is deserved, what is given, what is right and what is wrong, I like rhymes, I am much more lyrical than poetic I guess, this writing does remind me of why I left and stopped critiquing, I think honest critiquing is one thing, but critiquing just for the sake of trying to get someone to change their work of art is something else. I have never changed any of my poems even after all the critiques because in my opinion, the end result would not be from me, it would be a completely new poem, I know I need to change and grow, but I just want to know if my poems are good or bad, there could be 100 different critiques with 100 different suggestions, which ones should we as a poet use and change our work of art, what if everyone is wrong and the poem is fine the way it is Just a thought Thanks Claus Ranswill 2009-04-20 22:46:59
My March VotesDuane J JacksonIf this is indeed a poem, it is unique, different and strange, it has been many years since being on this site, I see a lot has changed, what I see is a deep introspection of points, critiques, what is deserved, what is given, what is right and what is wrong, I like rhymes, I am much more lyrical than poetic I guess, this writing does remind me of why I left and stopped critiquing, I think honest critiquing is one thing, but critiquing just for the sake of trying to get someone to change their work of art is something else. I have never changed any of my poems even after all the critiques because in my opinion, the end result would not be from me, it would be a completely new poem, I know I need to change and grow, but I just want to know if my poems are good or bad, there could be 100 different critiques with 100 different suggestions, which ones should we as a poet use and change our work of art, what if everyone is wrong and the poem is fine the way it is Just a thought Thanks Claus Ranswill 2009-04-20 22:43:57
My Votes for MarchJames C. HorakIf this is indeed a poem, it is unique, different and strange, it has been many years since being on this site, I see a lot has changed, what I see is a deep introspection of points, critiques, what is deserved, what is given, what is right and what is wrong, I like rhymes, I am much more lyrical than poetic I guess, this writing does remind me of why I left and stopped critiquing, I think honest critiquing is one thing, but critiquing just for the sake of trying to get someone to change their work of art is something else. I have never changed any of my poems even after all the critiques because in my opinion, the end result would not be from me, it would be a completely new poem, I know I need to change and grow, but I just want to know if my poems are good or bad, there could be 100 different critiques with 100 different suggestions, which ones should we as a poet use and change our work of art, what if everyone is wrong and the poem is fine the way it is Just a thought Thanks Claus Ranswill 2009-04-20 22:41:00
Tale of the Bouncing BunnyMonica ONeillGreat poem, rhyme and story, this could easily be expanded into a children’s book, it flows, it tells a great story, it is creative, it rhymes with ease and is very visual, this could easily be an expanded children’s cartoon or short, keep up the good work, I see nothing bad with this, I look forward to others critique of this, how do you improve on greatness, the only other thing you could do is make it longer and give more adventures for us to read2009-04-19 20:51:58
In DreamsMichael BirdA very good visual and moving poem, I like the rhyme and the breaks of formality, dreams are a great subject and something everyone can relate to, I like the descriptions and the flow, to change a poem is to write another, but if you wanted to change anything, you could add more rhymes, longer sentences and paragraphs or just tweak the small ones a little, sometimes more is better and sometimes less is even better, if this were mine I wouldn’t change anything2009-04-19 20:41:17
Green Eyed LadyMichael BirdI like the rhymes , this reminds me of my poems, it tells a story, makes sense and is relatable, the only problem I see is this line "Love like I’ve never see" see should be seen I love the repetition of green eyed lady, and then the descriptions of the lady at the end of the sentences, very good, could have added one or two more stanzas, if you were to change anything I would make the 2nd or 3rd stanza similar to the first in style and repetition to keep the same flow, I also like the ….. ellipses, I used to use them in some of my old poems, Overall very good 2009-04-19 20:29:14
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