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Poem TitlePoet NameCritique Given by Gwenne D. BetnerCritique Date
The PassingJudy A BadgerDear Judy, “The Passing” is a hauntingly beautiful piece. We all are on “loan” and as much as we want to grieve being left behind we should rejoice that we are going home to be with Him. You so poignantly and elegantly portray this in your work. It is a quandary and you must have penned this with a heavy heart. But your beautiful ending “complete with a joyous reunion” gives “The Passing” it’s strength and a message for us all to be strong when it comes our turn to grieve the loss of those we so deeply love. It is a miracle. God Bless You. Gwenne2003-09-18 21:12:36
The SWAG MethodAndrea M. TaylorDear Andrea, This grand piece of work is magnificent! It is intelligent and introspective. You should feel amazingly proud and accomplished. I love your questions peppered throughout the poem, it constantly gives the reader pause. Everyone should be seeking answers to these questions. The beginning of your poem hooked me, your queries were thought provoking and genuine. The entire poem folded together effectively; to me it was impeccably rhymed and metered. My absolute favorite line is “We all suffer the loss of one tiny voice” it gave me chills up and down my spine. I have not read such a crafty, analytical, well-written piece of work in a long time. It truly is superb through and through. You have found your calling. Thank you for sharing. Peace - Gwenne 2003-09-18 14:29:20
GrandJudy A BadgerDear Judy, Your poem "Grand" brought back feelings of seeing my own babies grow. Oh, how I remembered that "dog eared daisy" I still get the head of a dandelion and I love it! Your line "And mixed with Tootsie roll" was just perfect! I feel like everything they touch is "Mixed with Tootsie roll". They are elves, I cannot wait to get to experience these feelings again when I have grand children. What a delicious feeling you have portrayed. Thank you and God Bless. - Gwenne2003-09-18 11:13:04
A Glorious DayCallie CothrenThank you Callie for sharing such a lovely poem. Simple yet intricate. By simple I mean you have taken a 24-hour period and managed to narrow it down to 12 sentences. Intricate because you were able to capture separate moments of the day that can have great impact on ones soul. "Casting long shadows on an earth still damp with dew" I love this line. I have awoken some mornings and wanted to right about them but I could not form the right words that capture it. This Line truly captures your morning. "Painting the sky with brush strokes of purple, pink and blue". I often look at the sky and think it is a canvas as well. Very nice ending to your Glorious Day! I thought at first perhaps it might do well if your poem was broken into stanzas. But no, I am wrong it works just the way it is. I can feel your Glorious Day. Good job poet.2003-09-14 19:28:41
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