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Displaying Critiques 1 to 3 out of 3 Total Critiques.| Poem Title | Poet Name | Critique Given by Jeff Green | Critique Date |
| Maundy Thursday | G. Donald Cribbs | 6th stanza "spackling?" should it be speckling or sparkling? I looked up spackling and found only the drywall compound. I would like speckling more. Reading the poem's last sentence as punctuated is a run on. "I feel my own jaw and this is what I know: the pull of tendon which snapped as I lifted this jaw from its skull has clenched The Word, His Eucharist, from my mouth as surely as the body lifted up from this world, finding a wheat field to fill the space between soul and bone." The lines are fantastic. I would drop the punctuation and just break the lines, for the most part, where punctuated. I like the poem. You have tied the images together well. The way they repeat through the poem reenforces the theme. The use of spiritual terms to described the natural and natural language to describe the spiritual works well. The contrast sharpens the images. Very well done. | 2004-08-16 01:33:53 |
| Waiting in the Cradle (revised) | Rachel F. Spinoza | Oh, well that changed everything, I suppose. | 2003-09-02 03:02:15 |
| Freeway | Rachel F. Spinoza | This is write perty. I love the colloquial language. Although I generally look a the Getty as a graveyard for dead art, it works so well with ghetto that I will not quibble. The free way does seem a bit jammed by war gods lately too. But I would loose the exclamation point, dono I just don't like 'um, too frivolous. Thanks for posting, got my vote. | 2003-09-02 02:57:58 |
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