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Poem Title Poet Name Critique Given by Jenni M Meredith Critique Date
Sing Lady Mary J Coffman I really enjoyed reading this poem. The descriptions are vivid and concrete with so many colourful images. It is easy to 'see' as you read. the rhythm works really well for me and echoes the dancing song of the subject matter. The layout echoes the content will too. I like the tight language, the way you make words work and your choices of words. The alliteration is strong throughout and not overpowering, but binds it together like an underlying beat. The many music words (adagio, crescendo, progression, rolling, etc) give the piece a wonderful musical quality and the development of the poem and the changing terrain it describes as a metaphor for the rise and fall of life works really well too. The many deep colours in your descriptions create vibrant mental images so your poem feasts the inner eye as well as the ear! I also liked the way you start and end with the song dancing on your tongue. That gives the impression of continuity, the eternal circle. etc. Thanks for sharing this 2007-03-07 21:55:31
little haiku's (from Don't Betray the Blood) Ellen K Lewis I always enjoy pithy sayings and short but deep poems like these. However, you call them haiku and they are perhaps more accurately described as haiku form. I say this because in all but one you do follow the seventeen syllable form with 5/7/5 (your final one here is 5/5/5 so perhaps the middle line is a little short for the haiku balance). But as I understand it, haiku should also be about nature and there should be two distinct images conveyed; (either the first two lines and the last line) or the first lien and the last two lines. I believe seneru are 17 syllable poems about human nature (if so these would fall better into that category). Aside from that the poems here are delightful and thought provoking. Remind me more of Chinese wisdom than of Japanese haiku. But this is not a criticism. I don't have any criticism of them as poems; only of the label 'haiku':) I hope I am not being too pedantic? 2007-03-07 21:12:30
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Poem Title	Poet Name	Critique Given by Jenni M Meredith	Critique Date
Sing Lady	Mary J Coffman	I really enjoyed reading this poem. The descriptions are vivid and concrete with so many colourful images. It is easy to 'see' as you read. the rhythm works really well for me and echoes the dancing song of the subject matter. The layout echoes the content will too. I like the tight language, the way you make words work and your choices of words. The alliteration is strong throughout and not overpowering, but binds it together like an underlying beat. The many music words (adagio, crescendo, progression, rolling, etc) give the piece a wonderful musical quality and the development of the poem and the changing terrain it describes as a metaphor for the rise and fall of life works really well too. The many deep colours in your descriptions create vibrant mental images so your poem feasts the inner eye as well as the ear! I also liked the way you start and end with the song dancing on your tongue. That gives the impression of continuity, the eternal circle. etc. Thanks for sharing this	2007-03-07 21:55:31
little haiku's (from Don't Betray the Blood)	Ellen K Lewis	I always enjoy pithy sayings and short but deep poems like these. However, you call them haiku and they are perhaps more accurately described as haiku form. I say this because in all but one you do follow the seventeen syllable form with 5/7/5 (your final one here is 5/5/5 so perhaps the middle line is a little short for the haiku balance). But as I understand it, haiku should also be about nature and there should be two distinct images conveyed; (either the first two lines and the last line) or the first lien and the last two lines. I believe seneru are 17 syllable poems about human nature (if so these would fall better into that category). Aside from that the poems here are delightful and thought provoking. Remind me more of Chinese wisdom than of Japanese haiku. But this is not a criticism. I don't have any criticism of them as poems; only of the label 'haiku':) I hope I am not being too pedantic?	2007-03-07 21:12:30
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