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Untriumphant Grey skies shine in my eyes for today And the foggy nights I cannot go It can't become clear, can't see, cannot hear I can't feel to the tips of my toes I'm a gloomy wannabe rockstar pathetic Sing to a solitary crowd A voice undefined undermined everytime By all of the people I've known |
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