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first love lost
once I took with chance at love and I fell, so suddenly,so fast I thought that we could make it always last but soon after, I did find that losing you was too much for me to bare I lost it all with the news you would no longer be there all I could do was sink deeper into a well of shattered dreams I could not even release my hearts lone screams and when at last I could speak I could only think to ask you why and wait in horror for unwanted reply you had to move and could not stay, nomatter what you said so you took your things and left my heart in their stead after leaving my trance of shock I fell to despair whe I found it takes more than love to keep you around disillusioned I became when with my dreams and hopes you moved away and nothing I could do, would make you stay written 5/11/95
this was written when i was 15 after my first loves parents decided to move across the country.
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