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APPROACHING FULL CIRCLE (a self portrait) My childhood has caught up with me. I gave it a firm brush-off, for I had important, compelling things to do, and it would slow me down. For a long while, it waited in the distance, a child in shadows, admiring me, wanting to be my friend-- and my equal. When my first grandchild arrived, I heard myself talking baby talk but not only to her: to friends, my husband, my coworkers. All the years in between: the pregnancies, snarled relationships, pets, children, horseback riding, skiing, Dancers' Workshop, the little certificates of achievement have gone--poof! Only the child remains, holding my hand, listening to my stories, being my friend-- and my equal. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Thomas Edward Wright On Date: 2004-04-01 17:29:15
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.36364
Marcia-
Thanks for submitting this effort to put a verbal face on yourself, your life as seen through your own eyes. As I've said to Ken and others, this is difficult. There's something about it that makes me uncomfortable, which is important, and it's getting in the way of me posting something in this genre.
I'll keep working on it.
I like the way you've circled up the wagons here, back into the child you thought you'd left behind.
tom