This Poem was Submitted By: Wayne R. Leach On Date: 2004-03-20 17:53:23 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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JOURNEY [A Vertebral Interlude] old cogged monorail tired of your burden of ore bending, creaking in disrepair unwilling now to carry more in your suicidal despair frail and weary chassis pinion and joints fatigued wracked and torn from overload coasting now at breakneck speed down a discontinued road taking the blackened secrets from your private hell-oven to a future you cannot face even in the witches' coven or your other evil place

Copyright © March 2004 Wayne R. Leach

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This is a re-post from 3-4 years ago. Just to see what some new people here may think. You of the faithful type may remember, and I won't be offended if you skip it for critiquing.

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