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Over Sophistication Blinded souls are taught into existence realizations of reality a refracted vortex mindfully rinsced orbits teetering on duality circulation of well bred contrivance halting for a milli eternity intricate overwhelmed connivance expanding syllogistic fraternity the brotherhood of artists housed in cards paint forevers brushing clear behind them a diamond playing jacks with one eyed shards of puzzlements which peer amid a gem a point enters vision starring intense shattering consciousness voiding pretense |
This Poem was Critiqued By: arnie s WACHMAN On Date: 2004-11-28 15:03:54
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.00000
a refracted vortex mindfully rinsced...sp...s/b rinsed.
Yikes...I don't understand this. To me it's just a stream of consciousness that perhaps you're
trying to overwhelm me with those big words that don't seem to go anywhere. Sorry, but that's
my taking on it.