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The Marsh Cat A table for two, with a wind swept promenade view. The rain running sideways across the window, we are served with cold white wine. We talk and talk about separate days, I am happy we are now together again. The starters and the main course flash by, it always happens with our time. The food a treat a real surprise, we'd planned on Chinese. I look into your eyes I know I’ll give you all my love, as nothing else is free! We are the last to leave, I run for the car, heading home to my empty house. On the sofa, talking about poetry and rhyme, then we climb the stairs. Naked now in a tender lovers embrace, until its time to go. Each time I grieve a little more, as you close my car door. It makes me want you all the time, to be able to say that you are mine. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Latorial D. Faison On Date: 2005-09-05 12:07:23
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.95122
Very nice gesture Stephen. Thoughts are so good to have sometimes. I'm left wondering about the title of this poem, and I'm assuming that there's some sort of imagery that lies therein of which I'm totally unaware, but I can speak to the beauty of this poem and what every line entailed.
The strongest point was the interest that this poem illuminates. It is a story of lovers, a man and a woman, and we are tossed in and out of time and in and out of the man's conscious mind.
What a lovely thought of love making and forever love. You paint a very real picture that readers can actually imagine as we read each word and every line.
Great poem. Thanks for sharing it.
Latorial
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