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Flashbacks My heart beats on, My breath ceases not, And I pray God’s mercy brings me joy. I pray for death. Blackest of nights Darkest of fears Reborn, relived. This poem, these words, A revolving door of relentlessness; The gateway to my airtight rattled mind Intricately lined in tapestries Of lemon yellow, gangrene and crimson blood- Packed full of colossal costs, Tailor made failures and the aftermath Of you. A gift, A family heirloom Just for me. Wrapped tight In jasmine scented white innocence Cattle branded and plagued by the devil’s command. I am the winter inescapable! In the midst of this summer’s valiant flight The days grow colder, More callus and shallow now And my genius fades quicker now. My eyes rarely meet the natural light As I ramble on and out Tongue-tied and twisted Mumbling to breadcrumbs of my fleeting sanity In the still of the night. My heart beats on, My breath ceases not And I pray for God’s mercy To bring swift The joy of death. -don't worry fellow poets, no intention of killing myself :) |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Gerard A Geiger On Date: 2005-08-31 09:45:14
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.90909
Dear Audrey;
Another fine work dealing with the guilt shame
and broken innocence of youth as a result
of child sex abuse. Startling sad
and Oh so real, with the shining beacon of intelligence
penetrating through the haze of shock and
hurt...associated with the self loathing and despair
brought on by this form chidhood torture.
Sad but a wonderful work nontheless. Please continue
exploring your talent Audrey..you have a wonderful gift.
Your friend,
Gerard