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The Moral Aspect "Power corrupts; absolute power corrupts absolutely." Put this to me, the day you come to die In death’s uneasy moment’s searching sun Of you, and all you are, and all you were, That you’ll need nothing from The Lebanon. Oh, will you not? Confession’s neither meant To be a crime nor prophylactic till The day we learn to weave a finer prayer, But what it is: a wish to reconcile Within the highest church, of Here and Now, Where all the evil is, and all the Host That drew us up, debased us with ourselves And gave us lamentations in our dust. Where did you think you lived? There is no shame My modern saint, in learning to forgive Our Judas, with his prayer around his neck, Who swung precisely so our Christ could leave The legend of His Holy Name behind. Yahweh capricious is: and hence the Christ And Shiva, Buddha and The Lebanon, All agents for eternal real estate, Must strike the mean of this unfairest deal. Put this to me, that Job’s forgiven God From love and not from mortal bloody fear And I’ll forgive your ignorance, and nod, Once more, at how All Power makes us wire Anew our neurons, now to genuflect, To lick His dung and say “It’s sugary!” And this is what you’d rather me forgive? I may, in time. But I am here and now And Man is my immediate concern, Who knows not what he does, and that’s the crux: Just like our God, we’ve better ways to learn. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Thomas Edward Wright On Date: 2005-11-26 13:40:40
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.83333
I think you need a comma after "shame"
and a snort of the son of James.
Right.