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Gunning, dying. On detour some six hundred-odd kilometres north of Melbourne, you can stop dead, fuel-less, buried by lost time in a town long by- passed. Macks no longer blanket Gunning in their amphetamined scree of diesel dust. Now shoulders grow heavier with weeds along the much less travelled road which still skewers as it locates the place, now ghosted by the meal that progress made of what all steady residents long took to be a settled fate, their hat-trick of traffic, commerce and pulse stolen. The new highway will never give it back. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Thomas H. Smihula On Date: 2006-02-07 08:27:43
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.60526
How the landscape changes as more find the hidden valleys. Each year a little less freedom, each year a little less space untamed. As progress moves so often left behind areas once traveled now desolate with only weeds left. We are nomads in a sense moving from one place to another. This is what I thought about as I read your poem. The highway runs over that which one thought couldn't be changed. Thanks for sharing a thought provoking piece.