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Cockroach After days of no consequence a cockroach turns up in its lozenge, legs pedaling the air next to its dead clone. An elephant sense of cemetery brings it all about, this species of walking bone, blackening out. These little lives, paranoid scurrying shadows that mistake a bathroom for a morgue, unfold a Rorschach epitaph, terrifying wings that fear to arise. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Thomas H. Smihula On Date: 2006-02-06 08:35:19
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.54545
Mark interesting picture yet the depth is felt within this piece. Fear to rise and face life we tend to just rollover and ignore. This is what I got from this piece. Taking something so simple yet bringing in a complex thought is always difficult and you have accomplished that here. Like the presentation for it makes it flow and the length is perfect in presenting a thought to ponder. Well done and enjoyable to read. Cockroach so dark and spooky...