This Poem was Submitted By: Thomas H. Smihula On Date: 2006-03-09 07:40:34 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!
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Inhaled Although not physical
you have entered this soul...
You have reached beyond the surface
and delved into the depths
It is the freedom of your spirit
without limitations, you have now placed within
Each of us a gift
yet you choose to share it
As the Sunsets blend into majestic colors
you will be remembered
When your spirit breathed
you captured this soul
You saw need, you understood, you saw richness
My guard was let down
You choose the entrance
bestowing more wealth
that this soul could release
your presense felt
Now as your Sunset arrives
I will be there with you... |
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Copyright © March 2006 Thomas H. Smihula
Additional Notes:
This was written on the spur of a moment for someone special at this site. They have given direction to so many over the years and this is my appreciation of those wonderful efforts. I have only shared it with two people here so I thought I better share it with the rest.
This Poem was Critiqued By: arnie s WACHMAN On Date: 2006-04-07 18:54:25
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.51852
Well done. We all miss her. P.S.: watch your spelling.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Jennifer j Hill On Date: 2006-03-19 10:51:55
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Tom,
Very nice tribute to a very deserving poet who has given more to this
site then she possibly could have gotton from it.
Fitting title and verbiage!
I'm so glad you decided to bring this one out and share it. I not only
enjoy the read , but also can relate to the contents.
I'm quite sure your tribute was apprciated by more then who it was written to.
Hats off to you for this.
Best,
Jennifer
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2006-03-11 18:37:25
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Thomas,
How wonderful to feel this for another!
[Sounds like Mell]
Breathe, inhale, you experienced another, how simply grand!
Lovely, caring words.
Dellena
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2006-03-10 01:19:09
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Thomas,
This is definitely a fine tribute, to one very special person though it is fitting of anyone who has been mentor, student, quiet listner. I do not know where to start, but I do agree that she has given so much, with her spirit a spirit has been awaken in many of us. You've done a superb job for something created on the spur of the moment, your hand must have been guided by a celestial muse who shares in your feelings. You have shown such deep emotions, and as the layers of this poem are peeled off one can see and feel the admiration and repect with which you hold this person. As long as there are people like you to write this type of poem about another, their spirit and gift will never be lost for it is preserved in each who has walked away with a piece of them, better for the knowing. I hope Mellodian has the opportunity to read this, it is a fine honor. Your words IMHO are heart felt and well chosen. Thank you for the allowing me the honor of reading this work.
Best always,
Lora
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