To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!
Click Here To add this poem to your "Voting Possibilities" list!
COFFEE CUPS Such long hours spent over coffee in sips of conversation some sweet, others bitter. Emotions, thoughts, feelings whirling, swirling from the bottom thick and rich and real like the cream that laid heavy in our cups. It is a bitter drink to think of where we were then and where I sit today alone and staring in this empty cup void of coffee; void of you but oh! still the thought of you I find so... thirst quenching. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Thomas H. Smihula On Date: 2006-04-06 20:49:57
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.76190
Nancy the taste is so fulfilling. That is what you showed this reader. Sharing time and emotions will almost always be retained within one’s memory. Like the thought and presentation. Well done. By the way I will attempt some Haiku this month for the first time. Thanks again. Thomas.