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Moonlight's Magic Dance Moonlights' Magic Dance At night I lay where moonlight plays and pools its magic round me enchanting me, it sets me free as sensual thoughts surround me. I drift away, and go astray to thoughts of sinful pleasure of wonderous, wild, and wicked wants all locked up, like a treasure. And as my mind it wonders through my sensual ideals a part of me is buried there a lust, I wish to feel. Insatiable, I must fulfill these wants I can't control 'I've waited here, for you my lord to burn me...to my soul.' Enchanted by her wanton ways unable to resist, the Knight, he felt his passion rise his heart a pounding fist. As to the ground, they both did fall in desires sweet embrace, he held her tight within his arms both hearts began to race. Nights' velvet cloak enveloped them, and darkness set it's spell, as they began to decend into passion's endless well. Their senses tumbled into time reality forgot, their bodies danced with fevered pitch, abandonment they sought. Beneath the moonbeams magic trance, embraced in ecstacy desire raged within their souls and flamed their fantasy. As they lay drenched, in moonlights glow their passion pooled around them, and swayed within their dance of love In golden liquid rhythm. |
Additional Notes:
re-posted, from 2002 with revisions
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2006-05-26 00:27:34
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.00000
Nancy,
I love your rhythm and rhyme.
This is a feel good poem.
Captivating, fun to read.
Love is depicted with such romance.[as we women like to dream of it!]
Most sensual and pleasing.
I could read this over and over and not tire of it.
Super job!
And lovely ending
It never let me down......clear through!
#1.....
dellena