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Landmines On what remains of the earth of Eden, jackboots rage, jealous for imprinting it with the It of Buber, to Cleanse the World. In trenches through our holy paragraphs, the Gestapo march with divining rods to poison water with crouching metal, lime the evidence with myrrh, frankincense, and give praise to godless philosophies. Born in the sixth millenium, under the sign of the Processor, we're the freaks of stack-overflow error: now, even sacred words explode behind our own lines. |
Additional Notes:
More cryptic rubbish from the desk of MAH.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2006-07-02 18:00:31
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.37500
Mark,
I loooooooooovvvvvvvve cryptic rubbish! [I guess]
I feel the anger of the ways of the world!
You don't walk alone. I'm right beside you.
I get upset of the total bs of everything.
Never are we encouraged to have our own thought and judgment on matters.
We are taught to believe whats taught. so how do we ever trust ourselves/
we are freaks!
to poison water with crouching metal,
lime the evidence with myrrh, frankincense,[love the thought of covering up poisen]
Our Eden needs to be reborn/redone.
Great job!
Dellena