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Longing ~ As I sit curled up on the couch, you slide in next to me. Oh so close to me, pressing your body next to mine feeling its warmth radiating, soothing. I lean over to touch you, feel you. The casual curve of your back, slender statuesque neck, and smooth contour of your face next to mine. Soft satiny hair faintly brushes bare skin. You slowly lean over gently pushing your face to my neck, flippantly fooling around with your teasing tongue. Tantalizing little oscillations up and down, finding your way to my ear. In and out, again and again, come gentle flicks of the tongue. Butterfly kisses. Then softly, sweetly, gently nibbling naked lobes. I turn to look at you. Your soft brown eyes, profound pools of dark amber, reflect my eyes as you stare into the deepest depths of my heart. Pleading, yearning, begging, until I can no longer resist you. Finally, I turn and shout ~ "Will somebody PLEASE let the dog out?!" ~ |
Additional Notes:
Hehehehehehehe.......for my fuzzy furry kids! :)
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2006-08-12 11:43:37
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Mary,
So delightful, fun and yep; you led us down the path. This was the type of read you just couldn't put down till finished, had to know the ending even if one suspected where you were headed. Love the ending, I think I live in your house.....LOL...I wouldn't change a thing, it is refreshing and candy for the spirit.
Warmest always,
Lora