This Poem was Submitted By: marilyn terwilleger On Date: 2006-09-12 07:02:19 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!
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A cinquain poem Hold me
In quiet safety
Of your arms strong embrace
Dry my tears of feigned innocence
Calm me
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Copyright © September 2006 marilyn terwilleger
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2006-09-16 21:30:15
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Marilyn,
Isn't it wonderful how much this cinquain poems can say with so few words. Ah, a brief respite in a womans time, and how many of us women have been exactly where you have described, made me smile at long forgotten memories that suddenly came rushing in, thank you.
Best always,
Lora
This Poem was Critiqued By: James C. Horak On Date: 2006-09-16 08:20:43
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Marilyn, your feminine beauty speaks here.
The trust that such resignation requires is
only earned by fierce labor on the part of us
men, but its worth is incalculable. Such a
thing required the word invention, completion.
Wonderfully, in the symbiosis of metaphor,
requiring my search for a dictionary, just as
such regard sets its own task...the lovely way
women have of asking, are we worth it?
Yes, you are.
JCH
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