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Retribution ~ your narcissistic character berates foul temperament of treachery consumes all virtuosity evaporates and crumbling walls of reason lie in ruins I rise up out of riotous remains with arms stretched high, I breach the binding chains a cyclone through a thorn bush , comes your scorn stabbing at my psyche like a knife while squalor and vindictiveness adorn this harrowing existence you call life between dead silence and cold sanity I ascertain my own veracity betrayal, the reward you allocate blind immaturity, your foible fault by arrogance and lies you desecrate with calculated cruelty, you assault your capillary movements bear no worth from absolute awareness comes rebirth my happiness, your callousness dispels my faithfulness, your malice has maligned from fracture into fissure, hatred swells invading every crevice of my mind no longer shall I suckle your obsession ascendancy is my retaliation ~ |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2007-01-04 11:20:24
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.90000
Mary,
It took me several reads to grasp the whole of this precise and well penned poem. Ah yes, how often have these feelings welled up inside to not be spoken but only to one's self. I applaud you for your courage to set pen to something that is so seldom given voice and to do so in such a fine manner. Kudos!
Lora