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Just Stuff I started to put my sons clean socks in the dishwasher, as he stood behind me, and politely asked me what I was doing............ it dawned on me - I'm a role model Full of neurotic tendencies, passionate, and flighty Steering toward perfection yet always ending up Upside down and frazzled, blaming hormones or neurotransmitters or the weather for my faults Multitasking, rushing, coming and going yet Right now, right now, this is just me..... I'd run through the rain, step in warm puddles Sing oldies in my loudest tone Brush cupcake crumbs off my sweater Sip hot tea till my cheeks flushed, recite poetry till dawn....... and cut every loose thread off my clothing Rush down the steps in pajamas and coat to grab the mail Feel loose and real Charge at the beautiful things that surround me Beg to hold it all in my hands forever As I model myself to this young man I wonder how he loves this lady so much |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2007-03-26 22:00:54
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
DeniMari,
It sounds like you are much blessed and you realize it.
You have a great relationship it seems.
Children must think parents are running around like chickens with
their heads cut off. This is the busiest time of your life juggling
all things. I think kids know what is done on their behalf and appreciate it.
Even if they don't say.
Enjoyed the moments in your life.
'Lovely'
I like also the appreciation you enjoy also.
These are the best of times being with family.
dellena