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Avoiding Tar and Feathers Placing one foot in front of another, tight wire walking lexicon embracing Tactlessly enduring gin sipping trundler. Huckleberry Finn comes to mind, bare-bottomed asses painted One big bulls-eye covering so fine the male exception to subtlety. |
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If you haven't read Huckleberry Finn, shame on you!
This Poem was Critiqued By: Nancy Ann Hemsworth On Date: 2007-04-02 17:53:58
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Hi James...do I ever like this little poem. I am a lover of short verse discriptive verse and this is one.
It gives me great clear images for sure..LOL..quite a bit of humor in this piece and it makes a strong point..closing your thoughts very well indeed. I love the descriptive first passage of watching ones tongue, at least that is how I took this to mean. Wonderful way with words, "tight wire walking lexicon embracing" great line! "tactlessly enduring gin sipping trundler" I love the connection of the off balance image and the "gin sipping" both a weave of sorts..great little poem, really enjoyed it..thanks for sharing. Nancy