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Present Plan Another test in the span of the Plan, For My Life Etc., etc., How the dark devilish world spins out of reach Trumpet and taps defile open ears waiting for victory Just too bad for you my dear, woman up and don’t shed a tear It has been written, it’s in stone, and you can’t bruise from pain Emotional, to the bone As if all and all hasn’t been enough Or not enough of Absent love, or the door to walk through to feel at home To bang the drum, be humble and alone It’s another test in the span of the Plan For Your Life Etc., etc. |
Additional Notes:
Sorry for being so depressing, I lost my job today.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2007-04-05 13:50:32
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.80000
I have come to understand that planning is not always a good thing for we are just taking a journey through life poet and this journey has many roads. Some good, some not so good but in reality we always seem to grow by our choices. Now this loss of job might be very depressing but just think of the new adventures waiting for you. Looking forward to the poem that shouts you have a new job.......good luck in your journey. God Bless, Claire