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A Thought for Those in Distress

    (During the big gale, November 27, 1898.) The dark’ning frown on the heavens’ face, The swaying branch in the wind-swept space, The cheerless note of the chickadee, As he, lonesome sits in the old elm tree; The sobbing wind and the whirling snow, That with hurrying pace through the heavens go; The robe of white on the earth so still, The immaculate drifts on the window sill; The grind of the slowly moving car, As it rumbles by with its sullen jar; The labored steps of passers by On their homeward plod, as night draws nigh; These be the things that tell the tale Of the ruthless march of the grizzled gale, With his shaking mane, and icy breath That falls on the world with the touch of death ! O, God, for the toilers of the sea. Tossed by its might so furiously ! For the suffering poor of the stricken earth, Who hopeless sit by a fireless hearth; For all who need Thy guiding hand O’er heaving sea, o’er wind-swept land, For the one of evil deed and thought, For the fearless saint who for Thee hath wrought, We offer a prayer as we sink to rest, In our home with comfort and plenty blest- Our suffering brothers everywhere, We commend, O God, to Thy gracious care ! by: Myron Oakman Patton

Copyright © May 2007 Kenneth R. Patton

Additional Notes:
It seems only right to use the free credit to submit a poem by the same author. Somehow it seems out of place to see the word "car" in this. I'm not sure what was meant by it, perhaps a train, or trolley? I think they had automobiles but they must have been pretty rare. Anyway, thanks for your feedback on these intriguing poems.


This Poem was Critiqued By: marilyn terwilleger On Date: 2007-05-17 09:46:23
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Ken....this is a marvelous poem. I don't know what Myron meamt by the word 'car' either...but for some reason I remember cars were first introduced in 1903 in the USA. I love the rhyming in this piece...he seemed to do it with such ease and rythmn. Were his works ever published? You may have answered that question earlier but I don't remember..(short term memory thingy) If not they surely should be published so a wide audience could enjoy them. thanks for posting these...they are priceless. Cheers...Marilyn


This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2007-05-13 08:54:07
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Ken ....first of all thank you so very much for the book of poems you recently sent me. I am going to have eye surgery soon so perhaps I will enjoy them even more when I can actually see them. In the meantime I need to once more tell you how great the above work is; how it just flows and produces image after image. I can hear someone reading it out loud and the voice is wonderful. Looking forward to a copy of your great grandfather's work once you have published them as well......remember to send a bill please.......he is certainly smilling upon you these days. God Bless, Claire
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2007-05-12 11:46:38
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Oh Ken, This is yet another jewel, I so love reading his work...even with subject matter there is something comforting about the way he wrote. I will be sending you snail mail addy when I can so when you have the copies ready I can get one from you.... Wow, these are just great. Best, Lora
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