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Akela

Akela was a gray timber wolf. Powerful with large feet, robust limbs and a magnificent tail. He defied fear, denied defeat, and revered his only mate. His enemy was man and the jaws of iron. It was spring, a time for awakening, a season to bear young, hunt and forage. This day Akela would seek a den for his mate. The early morning air was crisp but clear, timber tops creased the sky, brushing a sunrise with splendor of crimson and lemon. Akela picked a path across the snow sprinkled loam, the female,  swollen with his seed trailed behind. Suddenly, without warning he heard a SNAP his mate, seized by the TRAP,  called to him with a pitiful whine. Akela spun around, hackles up, teeth bared in a vicious grimace,   but the jaws of iron were clenched. He ran to her side, licked her paw and face, attempted to erase the pain, with heart pounding he knew he was powerless. Desperate he began to chew on her leg, by instinct he tried to free her as blood flooded his mouth. In the end he lay down beside her. A day or two passed, in early dawn she gave her last sigh and was gone. Akela wailed a visceral howl from deep inside his soul. To  this day the timber still cradles  his mournful cry. 

Copyright © June 2007 marilyn terwilleger

Additional Notes:
This is a very old poem and was posted her years ago. I have many credits and will occasionaly post an old poem...


This Poem was Critiqued By: Duane J Jackson On Date: 2007-07-07 22:30:26
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Hi Marilyn, A very depressing piece this was and you did well to paint this picture, replete with the whimpers and wailing howls of Akela. There is a poignant message that sears through this peice, sharp like the terrifying iron of the trap that brought the life of Akela's mat to an abrupt end. Man can be very cruel contrary to his natural capacity to feel more than the other creautres that iccupy the planet with us. I've always been a fan of your writing and this too had your stamp on it. Nice job with the alliteration and imagery. Duane.


This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2007-06-29 17:45:02
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.75000
Poet from the beginning I knew my heart had already been touched by this poem.........though it has been posted before it is worth sharing once more; the words your pen flarred brought to life the love of this wolf for its mate; the season for new life to begin and the painful loss suffered deep within his own heart. The cry could be heard even here in Tully. We have a wolf that comes down from the mountain and he is majestically beautiful......thanks for posting again, God Bless, Claire
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2007-06-26 17:06:31
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.85714
Marilyn, It makes me sick to be so cruel to our fellow creatures. They give so much to the world. Humans are evil. Traps are a horror. Your poem may be older but it's always timely. you did a very good job. There was unrelenting interest/to the end. Defying fear/denying defeat was good. Timber tops creased the sky, very nice. Sad, probably true, and sinful of man. He got wolf pelts. A great tale. Dellena
This Poem was Critiqued By: Thomas H. Smihula On Date: 2007-06-15 08:46:29
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Marilyn this much about life of nature and well presented, written, and tells a story. I am so glad you posted it again for I did not get a chance to see it the first time or I would have remember the life of Akela and how he is still heard today. WELL DONE and very enjoyable to this reader. Thanks for sharing.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2007-06-14 01:16:11
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Marilyn, Love the story in this easy flowing image packed poem. You've painted this wolf's story well with your clever use of verbiage. One small thing, just to ponder; where you wrote, "and revered his only mate." possibly would read better "and revered only his mate" if that wouldn't change your meaning to much. I enjoyed this for I have a passion for wolves and so glad you decided to re-post this goodie. Best always, Lora
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