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Possibility Upon the landscape a brilliance, a harvest moon, in summer Clearness so sharp, each detail defined, as if a telescope is enlarging its image It slips past the horizon, pulling the mind with it, beyond into the next cycle Yet when viewed again, it is partially eclipsed... for soon it will be a new moon once again…. Like one’s life when given another chance |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Rene L Bennett On Date: 2007-09-03 21:07:12
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.76471
Thomas,
I love your format here. Your imagery is beautiful. Yea, second changes, sometimes far and few is always a good thing. It is what the person does with that chance that matters. Great write!
Rene'