This Poem was Submitted By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2007-09-11 18:44:55 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!
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Seat Belts Do Save Lives --------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Roller Coaster Road darkened as the rain fell
With each hill behind me the car picked up speed
Quickly they came and went
Did you feel the air?
Faster, go faster they yelled
I looked down, for just a split second
Causing my eyes to leave the road
We were already doing seventy
In a twenty-five mile zone
In that split second I lost control
Sliding sideways causing the car to leave the road
Hitting the ledge, bouncing into a boulder
Sending us air born one hundred feet
Landing nose first the car flipped front to rear
Over and over again
Another boulder caught our way
Up we went air born again
I felt the steering wheel as it kissed my face
And the roof as the metal cut into my head
Pain, intense it was
Yet the ride seemed in slow motion
I blacked out before we turned eight more times
Landing on the other side of the road
Twisted metal, broken glass
Parts of the car I loved so much
Stretched over the ground
Car crushed like a tin can
My spare tire sat on top of the hill facing us
There were four of us inside this car
Four of us still alive
The boys pulled me from the wreck
As Lindsay went for help
Blood spilled from the wound in my head
Fear was felt...breathe they cried
Wake up, don't die like this
I opened my eyes for a fleeting second
Then darkness over took me again
Sixteen plus staples closed the wound
Swelling began to surround my brain
Arms and legs ballooned
Not able to tell yet if they are broken
Face wears the steering wheel
Chest bruised from the air bag
I am alive and know in my heart
The Lord sent His angels to be with us
Knowing seat belts do save lives
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Copyright © September 2007 Claire H. Currier
Additional Notes:
This is a true account of accident in which my granddaughter was involved. She asked me to post it again as school begins for another year. We can only hope and pray our children will be careful driving as the school year continues on.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2007-10-05 01:19:33
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.90000
Claire,
Just wanted to say I remember this post. And it was a good idea to do it again.
People don't think of the horsepower behind an automobile..
It's a more dangerous a weapon than a gun.
Glad you brought it to mind, we so easily forget to be careful and watchful to be safe
and alive!
My best to you.....
Dellena
This Poem was Critiqued By: Rene L Bennett On Date: 2007-09-15 17:19:58
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.62500
Claire,
This gave me goosebumps. This true story seems to actually be true for so many and younger people, teens do not realise just how dangereous the roads can be. I am so glad that every one survived. My brothers daughter died in a car wreck not even a year ago. She was 23 years old and already a practicing attorney. Seat belts for all who ride in my car is mandatory. Thank you for posting this. It should be posted everywhere for many to see expecially it being a true story. Again, for the kids in the car as well as their families, I am so very glad they all survived a lesson I hope they all remember.
Rene'
This Poem was Critiqued By: marilyn terwilleger On Date: 2007-09-13 12:21:13
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Claire...what a horrible and devastating accident! I am so glad your granddaughter is alive and on her way back to school. When our children leave the nest and we can't protect them is a very scary time. This poem is an amazing account of that accident. It is well written full of suspense from the first line to the last. The imagery is so clear I almost felt like I was watching it happen instead of reading about it.
Blessings...Marilyn
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mary J Coffman On Date: 2007-09-12 20:32:31
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Claire, this one really hits home for me. Having been in an extremely bad accident myself last year (August 06)that almost claimed my life, I can so relate to this heartfelt poem. I have to admit, it was hard for me to read it the first few times, as it brought back all the terrors of my experience. But after re-reading several times, I can appreciate what it must have taken for you to write this. Your words very vividly "paint" that horrific picture in our minds. The emotion in this is also very evident. I am so thankful she survived, and is doing well enough to ask you to repost this. My heart goes out to you both. I shall keep you both, and all the other children's safety, in my prayers. Thank you for this stark reminder of how fleeting life can be, lest we not pay greater attention to the consequences of our actions. Thanks for sharing, Claire.
My Best Always,
Mary
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2007-09-11 21:58:37
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Oh Claire,
This is such a touching poem and one that needs a larger audience, this is such an important message. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. Yes, I buckle up and our truck doesn't move till every one is fastened in.God bless, and thank you God for the lives that were saved.
Lora
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